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Sentence 9: Normally we try to pay invoices within twenty days of receiving them, in this case, we will not pay any of the charges until you have provided us with a clear explanation of the bill.
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Sentence If you haven’t already discovered North America’s great outdoors, you shouldn’t waste any more time, the pleasures to be had are innumerable.
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Sentence 8: This building’s purpose is to allow students, and faculty to come to one site to work on their art projects.
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Sentence With this mailing, we happy to extend an offer to renew your policy.
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Sentence I do not wish to accuse anyone and am only concerned with improving conditions so we works as a team to meet deadlines.
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Sentence 1Any delivery that is requiring less than three hours to deliver by us is considered by us to be a rush delivery.
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Sentence 1All participants will be critiqued on there appearance and interview.
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Sentence 10: The seedlings are later transported by truck to a local distribution center for delivery to your home.
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Sentence Each year, about 250 fatal poisoning accidents in the United States alone is attributed to CO.
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Sentence 7: However, they have not effectively implemented this law, and still the garbage piles up.
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Sentence 16: If, however, he was not telling the truth about the hours, he was dishonest and made me sacrifice valuable work time.
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Sentences 11 and 1Although he painted all kinds of flowers. He is usually associated with his paintings of sunflowers.
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Sentence Our work stations are stocked with all the tools and equipment that you needed to do work on your car.
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Sentence 9: A lump sum repayment by check or money order.
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Sentence 1Salads and other cold dishes refrigerated promptly after preparation.
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Sentence 6: We begin the session and gave you guidance that will help you decide what kinds of jobs are suitable, given your current skills.
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Sentence Nestled in a wondrous mountain setting Twin Treasures offers magnificent suites, brick fireplaces, and balconies with breathtaking views.
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Sentence Medford have always been a safe, quiet town with very little traffic.
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Sentence 10: Also created many still-life paintings.
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Sentence 17: A more specific timetable is available after the meetings.
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Sentence 7: Please contacting the undersigned to make the appropriate arrangements.
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Sentence Susan Rable our director of medical services, informs me that tests such as these are normally performed on patients who are experiencing various types of thyroid disorders.
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Sentence 9: Tantalize your taste buds with fine food and a selection from our gourmet restaurant’s extensive wine cellar while one takes in a panoramic mountain view through three walls of glass.
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Sentence Recently, just as I was putting supper on the table, the telephone rung.
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Sentence 8: The gas around the battery could be caused to explode by a spark, and someone could get injured.
The most effective revision of sentence 8 would begin with which group of words?
Sentence 1Start the engine of the booster vehicle and run it a few minutes and then start the engine of the other vehicle.
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Sentence 8: Persons exposed to CO may complain of dizziness, headache, nausea, sleepiness, and similar flu-like symptoms.
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Sentence 1Organic fertilizers last the whole year and prevented the growth on which bugs feed.
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Sentence 14 We wood like to maintain a positive working relationship with Carew Labs.
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Sentence His sensitive nature was the genius of his work and is exemplified in the emotional canvases that he have painted.
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Sentence 9: Our presenters, Sylvia Rodriguez and Jeffrey Green, who have law degrees from DePaul university, have experience with factory safety and health issues.
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Sentence 9: His paintings include many portraits, especially those of peasants and weavers.
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Sentence We will be hosting the next workshop on thursday, October 15.
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Sentence 9: Thus, they forget all about the vehicles they have past, while vehicles that pass them stay conspicuous.
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Sentences 5 and 6: Leave the clippings in the grass. The need for fertilizers is reduced.
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Sentence 1Keep several of the dishes refrigerated until they is needed.
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Sentence 10: Once the larger kindling caught, close the door, but don’t tighten the seal.
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Sentence 1People who feel that they have been missing out on things because of their hectic pace needs to stop and assess the quality of their lives.
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Sentence By investing in just one weekend you will have the background knowledge that will give you lifelong skills.
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Sentence 8: The construction superintendent estimating that it will take a month to complete the garage addition, which will provide 30 new parking spaces.
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Sentence 16: Automatically being a member enrolls you in our apprentice program.
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Sentence As you know, Montgomery is home to many artists and who volunteer their time to work at the Galena Arts Academy with the children as a part of the city-wide Volunteer Artists’ Program.
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Sentence Avoid cutting your grass too short on hot, sunny days, the lawn will quickly dry out and burn.
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Sentence 1Any combustible engine is potentially dangerous because of the possibility of fire and people getting burned.
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Sentence 1I can be reached at home (213) 239-8206 after 5:00 P.M., or you may leave a message on my answering machine or e-mail.
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Sentence While some of the potential contaminants comes from the store or garden, the main danger is right in the kitchen.
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Sentence 1Now, still leaving power-draining accessories turned off take your vehicle out for a good drive on the highway to recharge your battery fully.
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Sentence 7: Dealing with your company’s needs we are most flexible.
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Sentences 10 and 1This will ensure a professional look. The look will be smooth.
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Sentence Impressed was I, when Elena first came to Ryan Industries, with her ability to learn the job quickly.
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When Elena first came to Ryan Industries,
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Sentence The lives of many have gotten to the point where they feel as if they are participating in a marathon, their days are crammed with a whirlwind of activities.
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Sentences 5 and 6: Newer models are more accurate than the earlier devices. Which were plagued by false alarms.
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Sentence 8: If staff assistants file reports sent from the legal department as soon as possible, then I am certain we will see immediate improvement over the present system.
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Sentence 7: Many times when I sign in after hours, fails he does to give me a pass slip that I need to use when I leave the building.
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Sentence Recently our department processed your income tax return for last year and determined that a refund of $6055.40 were owed to you.
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Sentence 1When we do, we disrupt traffic behind us and leave yourself vulnerable to collision with a car sitting in our blind spot.
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Sentence 1Our regular delivery is quite effective and takes less than four hours.
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Sentence 1You can see that Van Gogh were highly successful in engaging the viewer in emotional and beautiful works of art.
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Sentence 1Not only do our presenters give you rules and regulations, but also they offered tips on how to keep the working environment a safe and healthy place.
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Sentence 6: When you take a shortcut from the kitchen, certain people being bothered by traffic.
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Sentence 10: Furthermore, in almost 90 percent of the CO calls reported to utilities and fire departments in the mid-1990s, the levels found were to low to affect the average person.
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Sentences 2 and I will graduate this May from Central Community College. I will graduate with an Associate of Arts degree in Business Management.
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Sentence I am a long-time resident of this city and who wishes to respond to your editorial of May 24. If you rewrote sentence 1 beginning with As a long-time resident of this city,
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Sentence 9: Emergency teams have reported valuable information about CO levels, for example, one metropolitan area experienced a problem with CO levels that caused hundreds of alarms to go off during the first season they were available.
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Sentence 1This statement applies not just to those employees in the factory to all of your personnel.
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Sentence 7: Let us order them for you because at a discount you are a member.
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Sentence The three controls are, the damper lever below the door, the "second combustion" chamber lever above, and the door with its handle and seal.
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Which sentence would be most effective if inserted at the beginning of paragraph D?